from the author of “waverley ,” to captain clutterbuck, late of his majesty’s —— regiment of infantry.

dear captain :

i am sorry to observe, by your last favour, that you disapprove of the numerous retrenchments and alterations which i have been under the necessity of making on the manuscript of your friend, the benedictine, and i willingly make you the medium of apology to many, who have honoured me more than i deserve.

i admit that my retrenchments have been numerous, and leave gaps in the story, which, in your original manuscript, would have run well-nigh to a fourth volume, as my printer assures me. i am sensible, besides, that, in consequence of the liberty of curtailment you have allowed me, some parts of the story have been huddled up without the necessary details. but, after all, it is better that the travellers should have to step over a ditch, than to wade through a morass — that the reader should have to suppose what may easily be inferred, than be obliged to creep through pages of dull explanation. i have struck out, for example, the whole machinery of the white lady, and the poetry by which it is so ably supported, in the original manuscript. but you must allow that the public taste gives little encouragement to those legendary superstitions, which formed alternately the delight and the terror of our predecessors. in like manner, much is omitted illustrative of the impulse of enthusiasm in favour of the ancient religion in mother magdalen and the abbot. but we do not feel deep sympathy at this period with what was once the most powerful and animating principle in europe, with the exception of that of the reformation, by which it was successfully opposed.

you rightly observe, that these retrenchments have rendered the title no longer applicable to the subject, and that some other would have been more suitable to the work, in its present state, than that of the abbot , who made so much greater figure in the original, and for whom your friend, the benedictine, seems to have inspired you with a sympathetic respect. i must plead guilty to this accusation, observing, at the same time, in manner of extenuation, that though the objection might have been easily removed, by giving a new title to the work, yet, in doing so, i should have destroyed the necessary cohesion between the present history, and its predecessor the monastery , which i was unwilling to do, as the period, and several of the personages, were the same.

after all, my good friend, it is of little consequence what the work is called, or on what interest it turns, provided it catches the public attention; for the quality of the wine (could we but insure it) may, according to the old proverb, render the bush unnecessary, or of little consequence.

i congratulate you upon your having found it consistent with prudence to establish your tilbury, and approve of the colour, and of your boy’s livery, (subdued green and pink.)— as you talk of completing your descriptive poem on the “ruins of kennaquhair, with notes by an antiquary,” i hope you have procured a steady horse.— i remain, with compliments to all friends, dear captain, very much

yours, &c. &c. &c.

the author of waverley.